刘晓燕保命班
写作部分
一、写作三大原则
- vary 变化原则
①所以写不来的单词都写成自己会的词汇
②所有写不来的单词全部写成长难句。 - input 输入原则
背两个模版 - practice 联系
二、小作文
1. 公务书信
① 称呼:
文中已给出 Dear 文中给出的内容 注意大小写
文中没给出 Dear Sir or Madam,
② 第一段(自我介绍+写作目的):
文中已给出 I am + 文中给出内容
文中没给出 I am a senior who majors in software engineering education in this/a university, the reason why I am writing the letter, honestly speaking, seeks to ____.③ 第二段
文中一定给出要求,按要求来写。
It, to begin with, looks beyond dispute that not only … but also句型; then more importantly, so … that …句型. Another element I must point out here is that 简单句, which could be acceptable by the majority of 人.
小作文万能理由
原因类:
To begin with, I have decided to spend more time studying software engineering(把题干给的话题扯到这上来). Obviously, software engineering has contributed in a sea of fields nowadays. As a result, it keeps so critical that many high schools are introducing it into their primary school curriculums to help students keep pace with the morden times. In addition, I am going to participate in a national software design competition recently.
性格类:
Responsibility, warm-heart and circumspect are my nature, at the same time, a sea of interests keep available for me such as having good interpersonal communication abilities in quite a few meaningful activities to help others or doing sports to prefect myself.
④ 第三段
THerefore, it is timely moment for me to do sth(文章目的), and I am looking forward to your reply.
⑤ 结尾
Yours truly,
给啥名写啥
2. 私人书信
① 称呼:
文中一定已给出 Dear 文中给出的内容 注意大小写
② 第一段(问候+写作目的):
How is everything going in these days?
写作目的和公务书信一样
③ 第二段:
一切和公务书信一样
④ 第三段(总结句+祝福语):
So it is the very memoent for me to do sth(文章目的).Please give my best regards to your family.
⑤ 结尾
Yours truly,
给啥名写啥
3. 告示
① 标题:
Notice
② 第一段(呼吁式的欢迎加入):
Do you want to improve yourself and promote your coding ability? Then come to join us now.
③ 第二段:
一切和公务书信一样
④ 第三段:
So do not hesitate to join us. Please call 8673232 or email softwareClub@163.com for an application.
Software Club(题目中一定给) 右对齐
4. 备忘录(报告)
① 前四行
To: all the staff
From: LiMing, the assistant of the manager
Subject: donation of medicine to patients in poor area
Date:25th 4, 2019
② 第一段(具体的活动以及活动的时间和地点):
All staff are required to attend the meeting, which will be held next Friday in the dinning hall.
③ 第二段:
一切和公务书信一样
④ 第三段(再次确认活动的时间和地点以及要求每个人必须参加):
The meeting will begin at 2 o’clock and everyone must be present on time.
Li Ming(右对齐)
公务书信模版(最终 )
Dear Sir or Madam(或文中给出的),
I am a senior who majors in software engineering education in this/a university, the reason why I am writing the letter, honestly speaking, seeks to ____.
To begin with, I have decided to spend more time studying software engineering(把题干给的话题扯到这上来). Obviously, software engineering has contributed in a sea of fields nowadays. As a result, it keeps so critical that many high schools are introducing it into their primary school curriculums to help students keep pace with the morden times. In addition, I am going to participate in a national software design competition recently.
Therefore, it is timely moment for me to do sth(文章目的), and I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours truly,(右对齐)
给啥名写啥(右对齐)
三、大作文
1.押题
1)人生哲理类
团队精神、合作类的话题:teamwork、cooperation
挫折失败类的话题:adversity、frustration、failure、difficulties、challenge、stress
快乐、知足类的话题:happiness 、satisfaction、mentality(心态)
诚信的话题:integrity、honesty
信任危机的话题:Crisis of faith 、trust、crisis
友谊类的话题:friendship
勤奋类的话题:diligence、endeavor
谦虚类的话题:modesty(英二不太可能)
2)社会热点(可能性最大)
污染:environmental contamination / deterioration
英二可能是:交通私车 traffic jam、private cars
酒驾与安全问题:Drunken Driving awareness of security
社会保障、医疗保险:social security、medical care
网络话题:网络:surfing on the Internet;垃圾短信:junk message;虚拟生活:virtual life
知识读书:knowledge、reading books
社会公德:social morals / ethics
不良行为:undesirable actions
献爱心:show your loving heart
健身热:exercise、keep fit
老龄化问题:the aging problems
垃圾分类:garbage classification
节约和浪费的话题:economy practice = thrift (节约)
虚假产品、虚假广告:false advertisement、fake products、authentic products
3)文化教育
保护传统文化:secure protect(保护传统文化)、cultural relics / cultural heritage / traditional cultures(传统文化)
孩子教育:children education、self-dependence(自立)、mental / psychological、 health / fitness(心理健康)
科技创新:creation、technology、innovation
4)经济管理
网上购物问题:electric commercial transaction
2.大作文模版总结
图画作文模版
第一段
What has been clearly found it that 图画描述.The message conveyed in the picture seems to be that sth(文章主题) is claimed even more vital(重要) / fatal(严重) under current situations.
第二段(原因阐述段)
A sea of elements, by thinking it over, could never fail to be pointed out here. The most essential one seems that 原因简单句 although(虽然)……(万能的让步状语从句,尽量不用,能自己写就自己写 a train of human beings by no means shed light on it deliberately); Another element that could be used here is that 原因简单句(主谓中间插入语), as every one can see it,(which引导的非限定性定语从句)which has been widely accepted by almost all children and adults. Then in the end, if every one of 人 failed to do sth, he or she would pay a heavy price in the near future.
第三段(好的是倡导、坏的是解决)
The rapidly actions are taken, the more effectively the issue will be relieved within the foreseeable future. Parents, as the primary factors in children’s education, should never fail to…..; then as a private individual, sth could be done. As a consequence, just as LuXun has put it “Just talking is not enough, it is important to do. “
图表作文模版(最终)
图表描述
一定是两句话。要么是百分之多少的人做了什么事情。要么是什么什么的数量增加或减少。两句话中间加连词:同时或但是。分成两种情况:
饼状图
What could be seen clearly in the table, 36.3 percent of consumers , when having dinner in restaurants,regard specialties as the most important thing. By contrast, it is surprising that only 7.3percent of citizens care about the price of their food. Apparently, the drawing tries to reveal to us: the price is no longer the main concern for quite a few national citizens.
柱状图
the amount of Chinese cars , from the year of 2008 to 2009, rocketed by 10 percent rapidly. on the contrary, the quantity of Japanese ones, in the same period, dropped to 15percent dramatically.
增加 动词表达
rise expand climb soar jump rocket ascend accumulate, surge swell
减少
drop decline dive plunge descend, diminish dwindle. Shrink; go down, fall off,
完整图表作文第一段:
As is shown in the bar chart, the number of graduates,from the year of 2005 to 2009, rocketed to 7million sharply on the contrary, the youngsters who can find jobs ,as is shown clearly, grew slowly from 1.55million to 200million. It is clear that the chart wants to draw our attention to the difficulty that today’s university graduates are faced with employment.
第一段
What has been clearly found it that 图表描述.Its drawer, as every one can see it is trying to clarify a fact that +文章主题
第二段(原因阐述段)
A sea of causes, by thinking it over, could never fail to be pointed out here. The most essential one seems that 原因简单句 although(虽然)……(万能的让步状语从句,尽量不用,能自己写就自己写 a train of human beings by no means keep an eye on it deliberately); Another element that could be used here is that 原因简单句(主谓中间插入语), as every one can see it,(which引导的非限定性定语从句)which has been widely accepted by almost all children and adults. Last but not the least, if every one of private individuals failed to do sth, he or she would pay a heavy price in the near future.
####### 可用一个万能理由
The most vital one seems that Chinese economy and technology, with the common endeavors of all private individuals, has been developing rapidly. Under such conditions, society is becoming more stable and harmonours. As a result, more Chinese are willing to do sth.
第三段(好的是倡导、坏的是解决)
The rapidly actions are taken, the more effectively the issue will be relieved within the foreseeable future. Parents, as the primary factors in children’s education, should never fail to…..; then as a private individual, sth could be done. As a consequence, just as LuXun has put it “Just talking is not enough, it is important to do. “